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                                                                I went on a talent contest.
  Have you ever been on a  talent contest? I have. I went on a  talent contest, and it was the most exciting experience I have ever had.
  Before it started I arrived at the studio. I was very nervous. Then Mike Frost came in and told us not to worry.
   When I went out on a stage I must sung a song of Mikle Jakcon. I  sung very well.  To my prise, I go to the next round. Then I danced and did other things,  suddenly I was in a final: It Was me against a boy called BiIl. We were very  nervous but I    sung and  danced better than Bill. I win the prise.
   I had a fantastic time and I would love to go on another talent contest in the future.
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  1. Marina22 апреля 2012 г. в 07:36

    Vladimir, correct mistakes in the following sentences (you are talking about PAST experience:
    1. When I went out on a stage I must sung a song of Mikle Jakcon.
    2.I sung very well.
    3. To my prise, I go to the next round.
    4. but I sung and danced better than Bill.
    5. I win the prise.
    Yout mark is GOOD.

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  2. Vladimir Mzavanadze1 мая 2012 г. в 10:29

    1) When i went out a stage I must SANG a song of Mikle Jakcon.
    2) i SANG VERY WELL
    3) To my prise, I went to the next round
    4)I won the prise.

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  3. Marina2 мая 2012 г. в 09:51

    Vladimir, if you are careless about spelling, I will put you a "two".
    Look again at sentence 1 ( what is Past Simple of the verb MUST?);
    3 - to my SURprise.

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